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Mirror, Mirror on the wall,
Some are wide and some are tall,
Show the me that others see,
And not the me I choose to be.
The mirror shows the way I look,
And not the pain that I have shook.
The pain that grows inside me still,
The mirror shows you what it will.
Looking at myself inside,
The mirror shows me what I hide.
The pain I feel is deep within,
And buried under layers of sin.
I long for the day when I can see,
My true self in the mirror, looking at me.
No pain I hide, beneath my skin,
Just me, the same, both out and in.
©2006-2009 ~The-Love-Monk
:iconthe-love-monk:

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This poem was written after my long hiatus of writing nothing, because suggested I write something... so i asked for a topic, and she said "mirrors" so I was like "... okay." and this is what I produced. ^_^0 hope y'all like it. I do.

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:iconvash1985:
Nicely done Nate

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"We could of stood here standing around trying to figure out what to do, but in the mean time, the spider would have eaten the butterfly. I simply made the decision for you Vash."
"KNIVES YOU IDIOT! I WANTED TO SAVE THEM BOTH!"
:iconspazannah:
Nice imagery hun, it's very good! :heart:
:iconwatchatophat:
Good job kid. It hits home.

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"You and I make Nintendo Wii." ~Leetstreet Boys
:iconebonwings:
I <3 the imagery. Descriptive prose FTW!
:iconthe-love-monk:
O_o;

... Thanks? lol.

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"You said it yourself, Kain... there are only two sides to your coin."

"Apparently so... but suppose you throw a coin enough times, suppose one day... it lands on it's edge."

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